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freakyAngel
2007-11-27
ch 5,
abuseThis feels like a summarized version of In The Name Of Science, only these two manage to escape. I'm not saying they're both the same, I'm just saying it feels similar.

This story seems kinda raw. Pretty straightforward, and definitely packed with emotions. But it's like they're... clinically viewed. Sort of. I don't know, I can't describe it properly. But your way of writing is certainly interesting.

Heh. UPDATE!
Laughing In the Night
2007-05-30
ch 5,
abuseWhy won't you update? It's been over six months, you know.
Larentia
2007-01-18
ch 5,
abuseDeirdre is my FAVORITE name. I seriously plan to name my first born daughter that. I really like this so far. Granted, I do think they went at it a little too quickly (you want the romance to be gradual, you know? Save some stuff), but overall..this has some serious potential. I hope you're going to answer the unanswered, like why were they chosen? How do they relate? Who were the "big, bad men" and the people in the white coats? Etc, etc.

Very good! I really hope you update this soon.
(P.S.: Finish Me Off has been updated!)
Lady Katreina
2006-11-12
ch 5,
abuseThank you for updating.
I love it.
Tatiana Moore
2006-11-11
ch 5,
abuseAnother really good and unique chapter! :) I was a little confused because weren't they talking with their minds in the beginning of the chapter? And then later, after she goes in the past (or sees a memory about Danny's past) he says something like "you didn't say anything, your mouth didn't move". I may need to go back. I'm interested to read more about why this was done to them and what brought on their "feral" sexual urges.

Keepy writing!

:)T
j.c-chic
2006-11-11
ch 5,
abuseOMG! THAT IS SO COOL!
Tatiana Moore
2006-11-10
ch 4,
abuseGreat chapter. LOL... I bet they're going to stary breeding other mutants. :) Looking forward to reading more... update soon.
Tatiana Moore
2006-11-10
ch 2,
abuseI do like him! :) I didn't expect him to come around and have the same thing happen. I'm wondering if she really was ugly when he first saw her and the shot changed her appearance, or if he just didn't look at her. SOmetimes I don't think we really look at people.

Moving on...
Tatiana Moore
2006-11-10
ch 1,
abuseWow... there's a lot of powerful stuff going on here! Moving on the chp 2...
BeccaBoo14
2006-01-01
ch 2,
abuseWHAT NOW? WHAT NOW? UPDATE, DAMNIT! awa, her being raped makes me want to cry... ok, i'll admit it, the rape 'sceen' in chappy one DID make me cry, but sh, i'm supposed to be a tough girl XD
LilyFinn
2005-12-12
ch 1,
abusewow...you're evil! you almost made me cry when i read this! i can totally relate to the teasing and ignoring from other students, but the whole thing with her father? that's so sad! i feel bad now! but it's the starting of a very interesting story! please update really soon!
Arwen Starfire
2005-12-11
ch 2,
abuseWoohoo, go Ryan! Is the serum the men put into their blood some sort of biological DNA changing stuff? Cause that is what it sounds like. It sounds like they are trying to make the perfect man and woman. Great chapter or "chappie" as you call it. Please continue. But do notice that we wouldn't know the guy's name if you hadn't of said "Ryan's POV". You might want to change that so we don't know is name, just like wedon't know the girl's name, or you could weave it into the story somehow. Whatever. Please do continue
Simply Lindsey
2005-12-09
ch 2,
abuseLiked it? What? I loved it! Man that came out of nowhere!I'm really confused right now...But its good os update soon!
Simply Lindsey
2005-12-09
ch 1,
abuseUpdate! THis is a great story. Sad, but good nonetheless. Cant wait!
Arwen Starfire
2005-12-09
ch 1,
abuseBeautiful beginning to your story. It is really sad how some fathers are like that, and the moms know and don't do anything about it. I think you handled the whole rape thing very tastefully, but one thing was unclear: had he done it before? Please continue this story.
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