I'm surprised this story doesnt have more reviews. its pretty good so far. update soon!

this story is really interesting, definatly keep adding on!

This looks like it could shape up into one of your best works so far. Keep writing Ian. Good job.

Great start, this was a very good prologue.

You introduced Patrick rather nicely, it seems to me so far that he's a very timid person. And I especially liked the cliff hanger. Can't wait to see what you have up your sleeve, update soon.

Really good beginning. The chapter was too short though. Write more! ...well yea anyways the only problem I had with the story (other then that) is that you didn't have alot of deep description, it was just too simple I guess...I don't know how to explain it but yea...Well good story I'll keep on reading

adios