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| Siamh 2006-12-04 ch 6, | abuseI'm surprised this story doesnt have more reviews. its pretty good so far. update soon! |
| bricks-with-tails 2006-03-22 ch 4, | abusethis story is really interesting, definatly keep adding on! |
| Jen 2005-12-13 ch 1, anon. | abuseThis looks like it could shape up into one of your best works so far. Keep writing Ian. Good job. |
| Blah246 2005-12-10 ch 1, | abuseGreat start, this was a very good prologue. You introduced Patrick rather nicely, it seems to me so far that he's a very timid person. And I especially liked the cliff hanger. Can't wait to see what you have up your sleeve, update soon. |
| Wildxillusions 2005-12-09 ch 1, | abuseReally good beginning. The chapter was too short though. Write more! ...well yea anyways the only problem I had with the story (other then that) is that you didn't have alot of deep description, it was just too simple I guess...I don't know how to explain it but yea...Well good story I'll keep on reading ^^ ♥adios |