I love this, except for the use of the word 'soul.' This actually means nothing about the quality of you poetry, just that I've been around fictionpress for way, way too long.

this is pretty. good work!

There are so many meanings to pull out of this... I just.. don't have any words...

Fantastically written! ^_^

had to read it for the title - love that tune! (stone roses, just incase some one like cliff richard used it as a title, lol)

this is carefully written, no waste of words, and lovely internal rhymes. nice one!