I liked the "Barn Owl eyes", kind of haunting. Last line is wonderful. I Like the struggle to get over some of the words, it speaks volumes for word placement when the pace is dictated so well. And for your reviews, yes, my spelling has fallen off of late, perhaps a few too many lost brain cells.

aww! i'm almost positive you got the inspiration to write about your cat from my poem...

Lovely. *grins* Cats, eh?

awe! i loves my cat too! very sweet little poem. lovely. -the Lady Elaine

hehe! i love this. funnel-type content effective here.

Worship cats and owls and ye shall gain the wisdom of ages.

Cats are so cute! Very good poem!

wow very deep. 'juxtaposed' nice use of the word. well done, i liked the way you did this. i don't QUITE get what its about well i kind of do, but it is very subtle and so well done.

love the word-choice. great last line and vocab is incredible. awesome work! keep writing,

mez

wow. this was really interesting. a little confusing, but still pretty good... the ending line was... interesting. it made me laugh.

this is good...i liked the line:'no suprise im mesmerised'write more!

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hm, I like this! It's short but it gets you.