|Reviews for shalom|
| Moondog Dozier 1/7/06 . chapter 1
I liked the "Barn Owl eyes", kind of haunting. Last line is wonderful. I Like the struggle to get over some of the words, it speaks volumes for word placement when the pace is dictated so well. And for your reviews, yes, my spelling has fallen off of late, perhaps a few too many lost brain cells.
| angelcloudsh 12/13/05 . chapter 1
aww! i'm almost positive you got the inspiration to write about your cat from my poem...
| The Watched 12/12/05 . chapter 1
Lovely. *grins* Cats, eh?
| Haberdasher 12/12/05 . chapter 1
awe! i loves my cat too! very sweet little poem. lovely. -the Lady Elaine
| Morcirith 12/11/05 . chapter 1
hehe! i love this. funnel-type content effective here.
| Decollage 12/10/05 . chapter 1
Worship cats and owls and ye shall gain the wisdom of ages.
| Silent-Maiden 12/10/05 . chapter 1
Cats are so cute! Very good poem!
| Changethesubject 12/9/05 . chapter 1
wow very deep. 'juxtaposed' nice use of the word. well done, i liked the way you did this. i don't QUITE get what its about well i kind of do, but it is very subtle and so well done.
| FunkyFlower 12/9/05 . chapter 1
love the word-choice. great last line and vocab is incredible. awesome work! keep writing,
| a lonely september 12/9/05 . chapter 1
wow. this was really interesting. a little confusing, but still pretty good... the ending line was... interesting. it made me laugh.
| WindWing 12/9/05 . chapter 1
this is good...i liked the line:'no suprise im mesmerised'write more!
(:(:(: Peace Out :):):)
| JoyfullyStruggling 12/9/05 . chapter 1
hm, I like this! It's short but it gets you.