|Reviews for please|
| shadow-spirit 1/3/06 . chapter 1
i always envy writers who can say a little and meen a lot - u dont waist words adn it makes ur writing all the more interesting - i like the use of mundane imagery like used cigerettes juxtaposed with the abstract personification of death breathing. the last line is intreagueing and powerfull
| Ellin Louise 12/28/05 . chapter 1
short but doesn't end leaving the reader wanting more. good job.
| Spiral Artist 12/14/05 . chapter 1
Pained... immensely painful.
| a lonely september 12/9/05 . chapter 1
this whole thing was perfectly written. i liked it. : )
| randompoetry 12/9/05 . chapter 1
I've read alot of your poems on the just in page and you have a very interesting style, its beautiful.
| account not in use 12/9/05 . chapter 1
it's like a fond longing, and i love it