i always envy writers who can say a little and meen a lot - u dont waist words adn it makes ur writing all the more interesting - i like the use of mundane imagery like used cigerettes juxtaposed with the abstract personification of death breathing. the last line is intreagueing and powerfull

short but doesn't end leaving the reader wanting more. good job.

Pained... immensely painful.

this whole thing was perfectly written. i liked it. : )

I've read alot of your poems on the just in page and you have a very interesting style, its beautiful.

it's like a fond longing, and i love it