Love it. The format is perfectly done. love the lines; "Made of rings and things/That love should be"

So sad but so wonderfully done. :)

gorgeous :D i like the way you've made 'seperation' in bold. and there are some lovely lines. keep writing!

i like the rhyming that broke through in this poem. normally i dont like rhyming because it sounds so... forced&wrong but you did a great job with this.

i always adore your ending lines