Reviews for the separation before divorce

a lonely september 2005-12-10 ch 1,	abuse' so shut the ** up and stay on your side.if you're feeling so lonely just go to your cornerand keep your face to the wall. ' wow. that was really bitter. that took the poem up a knotch. the last line took it far, as well. it gave it a sad touch. ' i know you're not listening. 'nice job.
sunday night sky 2005-12-09 ch 1,	abusei like this; its caught the essense of a fight. good work.