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The Sweetest Oblivion
2005-12-09
ch 1,
abuseinteresting. i love the second stanza. nice job.
my dangerous angel baby
2005-12-09
ch 1,
abuse"How our words are spears" I love that line and the metaphors about being able to slice someone with words. It's a very lyrical poem. Great job!
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