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| Black and White Dreams 2006-02-19 ch 1, | i liked it! i really did! when i first looked at the title i thought it would be about suiside (sry my spelling is atrocious!lol) or something!i suppose it could be though... u know, like, having an argument with urself... telling urself no one wants u around... telling urself to go away... anyway, keep writting! choa! love, caitlin |
| Cloak-of-Shadows 2006-02-19 ch 1, | This poem distinctly reminds me of my father every two or three days... continuously yelling at me for slipping by in high school doing no work and acing tests hehe. |
| oh so cliche 2006-02-19 ch 1, | Interesting. I think that if you use more connotation it would be even better. But other wise its good. (PS: Not my situtaion. But I thought it was relatable if anyone has a problem (drinking, drugs, eating disorders, cutting, ect...). |
| the ideal sin 2005-12-09 ch 1, | Good job, I like how the poem itself was set up |