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Black and White Dreams
2006-02-19
ch 1,
i liked it! i really did! when i first looked at the title i thought it would be about suiside (sry my spelling is atrocious!lol) or something!i suppose it could be though... u know, like, having an argument with urself... telling urself no one wants u around... telling urself to go away... anyway, keep writting! choa! love, caitlin
Cloak-of-Shadows
2006-02-19
ch 1,
This poem distinctly reminds me of my father every two or three days... continuously yelling at me for slipping by in high school doing no work and acing tests hehe.
oh so cliche
2006-02-19
ch 1,
Interesting. I think that if you use more connotation it would be even better. But other wise its good. (PS: Not my situtaion. But I thought it was relatable if anyone has a problem (drinking, drugs, eating disorders, cutting, ect...).
the ideal sin
2005-12-09
ch 1,
Good job, I like how the poem itself was set up
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