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| thursdays and rain 2006-01-05 ch 1,  | abusethis was just tragic & sad & ohsobeautifully written ♥ this is definitely going on my faves & so do you c: |
| SSSSS 2005-12-25 ch 1, | abuseI must say, you're a very good poet. This poem is fantastic, not to mention very true. Tschau,Sam |
| wildwolffree17 2005-12-24 ch 1, | abuseTragically beautiful and tragically true. |
| whatsapenname 2005-12-14 ch 1, | abusestarted out alright and really picked up at "but theyre not really angels theyre". kept on a powerful streak until it wound down at around "and the screams are lightning to those who are listening for them" and dwindled off at the end. the beginning and end were alright but that middle part was truly fabulous and screamed for justice. well done. ~whatsa~ |
| madhypocrite 2005-12-12 ch 1, | abuseand the screams are lightening to those who are listening for them but mere static to those who would rather ignore. I love it. |
| Psycho-Hippy 2005-12-12 ch 1, | abuseWow. Powerful stuff. I like the refernces to the carnival - good work! Keep writing! |
| words music and love stay t... 2005-12-11 ch 1, | abuseWhoa! This is one of the most amazing poems ever! I love it so much!! Right to the fav's list! My favorite line is...well all of them! But "when ignorance is a sheild and not a weakness" That's awesome! And the last line is really powerful!! You're a wonderful poet!!Bravo!Much lof,The Scottish DragonP.S. Thanks for your review!! |
| Deep Mila NN 2005-12-11 ch 1, | abuseSo true, a sad reality it is that those who cant speak have so much good to say, but the world wont care to listen. Love it good job! -Mila |
| Suicidal Skies 2005-12-11 ch 1, | abuseIt's a deep, and the imagery is nothing short of a amazing. ^^ Very powerful. ^^ |
| technically okay 2005-12-10 ch 1, | abuseI rather like this poem; the way you cut off the lines in the middle adds a great effect. I also like the style you did it in; it's really strong and gets a forceful message across. technically okay |
| Eve Hopeless 2005-12-10 ch 1, | abuseWow, this is pretty amazing. The imagery is amazing and the words flow so evenly and deep from within. While the meaning and the moral (if there is one) remains unclear, the emotion and the words are as clear as a moon-lit crystal. Bravo, and thank you for the review. As Always,Eve |
| Extraho-Uxor 2005-12-10 ch 1, | abuseWow... Such a sense of hopelessness. I really got into this. The first time I read it, they were merely words, the second, I applied meaning to the words, and the third, they made sense. Truly a wonderful piece. |
| Charl33t 2005-12-10 ch 1, | abuseTwisting, turning, vibrant piece. Very powerful. My favorite lines are, "but they're not really angels they're/ all the things that ever died for others folly and/ all the innocence slain by its own kin...". They radiate struggle and mercilessness. Great job, and thanks for the reviews! |
| in theory 2005-12-10 ch 1, | abuseYour poet's voice is so uncontaminated by the pressure to be average/standard/ligitimate, and it's refreshing because only by being different and maybe a little strange can you present the world with something new. I like your style, to coin a phrase. |
| yesssssss 2005-12-10 ch 1, | abuseWOW. The imagery in this is amazing, I absolutely love the way some of the parts are like frantic, run-on sentences; allround amazing work. I'm adding it to favourites. |