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Systole 2005-12-09 . chapter 1
I really enjoyed this poem. your imagery is intense, and unique, i can see what your talking about. a subtle style, you leave the reader to conclude, and it is an emotional piece. you speak of many emotions, love, hate, shame, ambition, passion, loneliness, many things that adultery contains. Very good, i particularly like the last verse. Lovely!
Paganka 2005-12-09 . chapter 1
wow...good poem
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