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Nigousan-Aoiro
2005-12-10
ch 1,
abuseI hate to say it but we all give a ** on some level, but I for one do not look at you like a freak; if I did I would would be calling myself a hypocrite.Humanity is compelled to deny people to be different. People do not reject individuals, but really differences in others. There is no point in changing for the approval of others. Your actions are describe how you feel, so there is no need to cope with the opinions of others
jellie bean
2005-12-09
ch 1,
abuseReally powerful words and strong imagery. I really like the lines "I must live with the memories, carved into my skin forever." I think you have great talent, keep it up.
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