|Reviews for Verse|
| My New Pen Name 5/22/06 . chapter 1
I like this one, too. Succinct and well-worded. Nice one!
| blood-red white and blue 5/2/06 . chapter 1
definatley-well-i dont know what to say. It was very good, but there is another word im looking for-im thinking "true", but i dont know.
P. S. if u read 3rd chapter of my story u will find out the cause of the fighting (u would need to read the 2nd one first)
| Marie Ellen 2/2/06 . chapter 1
Amen! Who has felt this before? *world raises hands* And the way you put it is so powerful and true.
| LordK 1/29/06 . chapter 1
Oh, I REALLY enjoyed this one. The ending is SO powerful. The accusations in it are strong and interesting.
I'm still in a bit of amazement at the way eveything fits in your poems (or the three that I've read, anyway). This is really, really good, again. I just want to speak this when I read it. Amazing. I genuinely want to read the next line after I read the first with your writing, and then the next poem after I finish that.
| breezy nostrils 1/15/06 . chapter 1
so true. i can really relate to this. simple, but goes a long way. keep on going!
| BellonaFlayreRiver 1/9/06 . chapter 1
id almost title it Selective Hearing.. but thats just me. Verse is good too. it says just what needs to be said which i love very much. lovely.
| Joelle Duran 1/3/06 . chapter 1
I like this. Short and concise-there's a definite power in brevity. Unfortunatly, that's a situation all too many can empathize with.
| Herminia 1/3/06 . chapter 1
Overall, good job. However, I felt that your poem was a bit rushed at the last two lines. During the first four lines, you talked about "lash(ing) at me in anger" and "my words pour forth" and then you skipped to accusing the person of being "ignorant". I'm sorry but I think that you need to add more imagery or other information.
| aaidenkae 12/28/05 . chapter 1
ignorance is not bliss. its a curse. lovely poem.-kae
| sunday night sky 12/15/05 . chapter 1
i can relate to this. nice work :D
| Count of Casualty 12/13/05 . chapter 1
This reminds me of my step-dad... Wow, it's like exactly like him... Great work!
| pen it red 12/13/05 . chapter 1
I can identify with that poem. Very good. I've always favored short, to-the-point poems.
| Eirien 12/13/05 . chapter 1
Short ansd simple, yet really impressive and expressive, very honest and perfectly phrased.
| waitandhope 12/11/05 . chapter 1
Oh, wow. It flows beautifully. Very well written.
| BenevolentShadow 12/11/05 . chapter 1
Like you had trouble naming this piece I'm having trouble describing it- good job... Thanks for reviewing to my poem. It's been a while since anyones reviewed and it's nice to know its still read. (my other stuff is better)