I have only one question that i would like to ask :P When did you wrote this ? Where did you get the feeling ? XD anyway well done eventhough i'm kinda clueless =) CLUELESS¬¬ kekeke

are you SURE this is your first? it's friggin' great! great job on this, I love it

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This is your first? But it's so good! I love your rhyming! nice concept too; very well written! ^_^ nicely done!