Reviews for The Epitome of Childish

Ammom 2007-08-15 ch 1,	abuseWow...that is so weird, but funny. xD lol
Michael Ormand 2007-05-01 ch 1,	abuseThere is a certain childlike innocence to this piece. I have never heard of a woman turning orange from too much Sunny D but I have heard of turning orange from too much betacarotine (sp?)
Noihseret 2006-06-30 ch 1,	abuselmfao. this is hilarious. i love your writing! this one seemed more like a children's story. lol. great job!
Savetheplanet 2005-12-14 ch 1,	abuseYou actually know someone that turned orage from drinking Sunny D? Cool! This was a good poem, it made me laugh -even though you're not really supposed to laugh at others misfortunes, but go figure!~Savetheplanet :)
creativewritinginc 2005-12-13 ch 1,	abuseLMAO! You're really good!