Sweet. Simple but really cool rhyming scheme. The imagery is also simple but still has such a good level of poignancy. Thnx very much for this!

Beautiful...each word moves to the next with such exquisite grace and passion. Your poetry constantly leaves me in awe, few but precious. Keep writing. God bless, silent.

i like this, the rhyming is really nice and it flows well. good job.

Gorgious; it sounds like a classic. I love how your rhyming went smoothly and how nicely you described the Raven without mentioning him intill the end too. Now I must see what else you have, haha. Hope to hear from you,

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