|Reviews for Dark and Light|
| waitandhope 12/10/05 . chapter 1
I love the beginning, the comparisons between light and dark. It just flows beautifully. The last three lines, though, are choppy and don't flow light the rest of the poem. I guess they're much shorter, and they sort of sets the reader off balance. Also, I might change "Light is the bright absence of night" for somethething... more descriptive? I don't know. Overall, though, it's really well written.
| Silent-Maiden 12/10/05 . chapter 1
I'm not scared of the dark but I rather like the light. Very good poem.
| marti10 12/10/05 . chapter 1
VERY GOOD! WONDERFUL WORK!
| Colonel Augen 12/10/05 . chapter 1
I liked the idea of comparing light and dark by similarly balanced lines. But I think the last three lines were too..simple and didn't go with the rest very well.