THIS IS ABSOLUTELY GORGEOUS! THe imagery in this is fantastic, and the descriptions were livid, colourful and incredibly artistic. THe personnification of nature was great too, in general it was well-written. Great job, keep up the awesome work!

Beautiful! Love the range of colours. It's almost like a painting!:) Good job describing all the different times of the day.

"I see the magic at dusk

True orange and red-violet streak the sky,

A last bold burst of color

As Apollo finishes his journey,

And with one last sigh is gone."

Lovely! It's such an enjoyable read. Keep writing!