that is a cute story

so good!

Simply beautiful!! Write more stuff!!

Aw. Too cute. Liked it a bunch.

This was really amusing. I love the characters, they're so cute. ^^ Overall great story. Loves.

Aww. The ending was cute x3 Well, the whole thing was cute :3 (heart)

aww this is adorable.

Extremely cute. I love how chess is used here.

hey-- i really liked this story. i was laughing because i thot that the chess inthe beginning was a crazy metaphor for esx when they said phone chess and i was cracking up because it sort of makes sense.. anyway this is a really good story

That was just so cute and... just so cute. I play chess a lot so when i play with a friend of mine i always go " and by the way, checkmate" so it's funny. But i like the idea and it's nicely writen and i want more!

OH!! Thats a sweet little ficlet...

Aw. 'nuff said.

*grins* i love it! of course, i'm always a fan of slash, but this was very well written. and i love the whole "oh and *name*" "what?" "checkmate". props to you.

Great story!I loved it! :)So cute!