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amethystasheryn 2007-02-03 ch 8, anon.	abusejeez. Talk about a bad place to end a chapter. LOL. I love it..but (I ask it too): how the heck did she get woven into a knot? 'cause surely she didn't do it herself...
amethystasheryn 2007-02-03 ch 6, anon.	abusethe dome thing sounds like warding from Tamora Pierce's Circle of Magic books...but whatever. Another good chapter :)
amethystasheryn 2007-02-03 ch 5, anon.	abuseokay, didn't get as nasty as I thought it would. But it was nasty, even so...
amethystasheryn 2007-02-03 ch 4, anon.	abuseoh dear. This could get nasty, yes? I like it so far..interesting concepts ..or whatever that word is. ...off to read the next chapter now. :)
Moss Riversong 2007-01-06 ch 8,	abuseWow, loving this story :) Shame you haven't updated in a while.
For What Its Worth 2006-12-27 ch 8,	abuseYou know, you make it very obvious Starling was a mage as soon as you mention string magic. Butit is all right that way. Tyhe story's awesome, as they have all been.
dreamgazer220 2006-11-01 ch 1,	abuseIt seems pretty good so far :) I like how you basically just jump right into the story. Sometimes some authors can't really pull that in, but you did it niely. Looking forward to reading more!
Calmay 2006-10-04 ch 8,	abuseI like the story so far. Once I started reading the beginning I just kept on reading. I hope you release more chapters of the story.
Sophie Ulquiorra Allen 2006-06-06 ch 1,	abuseThis sounds like an interesting story so far. Also, some really great names here! I have a book similar to the one you described here. Pity I cannot find it. I will keep reading when time allows. Also, can you email me specific details about the MPC? Sounds like a thing I might want to join.
Ryustorm 2006-05-17 ch 8,	abuseReally nice, i loved how it developed! the whole family relationship is a great change to the typical loving parents, i do sound rather morbid. it sounds like the plot is going to be very interesting. i hope you write lots more. oh and becareful of mary sue traps with such female powerful characters! i'm sure it will be great!
La. 2006-05-01 ch 8, anon.	abuseAARG! That's not a cool place to end the story so far! That is perhaps the meanest most evil cliff-hanger I have ever seen in my entire life, and they normally don't bother me!! Erg, I really like this story; the idea of a color mage (at least to me) is really interesting and inventive, and I can't wait to see what happens to Wren. I also DESPERATELY want to learn all information I can about this new apparation of Starling. Sorry; sensitive person. When there was some way for Starling to still be partially alive and part of her sister's life, I wanted to know. And then you ended it! Well, sorry for the... un-calm nature of this review. The fact that I'm excited at least means that I like this story a lot. Please update. And just my idea, I think Wren should wear bracelets from Starling or her yarn of all different colors. Just because. It'd be useful, handy, she could draw on all her spells, and they'd be from Starling. Ok, later. Update please.
FlamingDoritos...too lazy t... 2006-04-29 ch 8, anon.	abuseNICENESS! I'm a happy penguin! I read an awesome story (aka YOURS) and the Flames are winning 2-0! Hurray! This is GREAT! I need more! lelelelele...moremoremoremoremore... :proceeds to do happy dance:
Celyn 2006-04-27 ch 8, anon.	abuseCool! I love reading this story... 'cos it's got so many great things in it, and also 'cos your colour associations are spot on! And having Star in the knot... wowsie! Wasn't expecting that. It was great the way Wren spoke to her, forgetting she was dead. There was only one thing that puzzled me; if I was Wren, I'd have been recahing for as much blue stuff as I could after reading that passage in the book. After all, the people out to kill her might be able to get round it... or they might not. No harm in trying, see. Write more, please!
Neko no Yami-san 2006-04-04 ch 8,	abuseO.o Staar?! Wonder what she messed up...hm maybe when Star was killed, she wanted to stay here so badly, that she left a piece of herself behind inside the bracelet and when she tried to do the protection spell, it just brought her back? Hmm, your the only one who knows for sure though^^
Teshgirl 2006-03-23 ch 8,	abuseOo... YAY allies!! Dr. Mike is cool. But I'm wondering, how did he train to be a Master of Mind? From a book like Wren's? Hmmn... Wow, big surprise at the end... Star's spirit is in the knot? o.o Update when you guys can! ^^ Tesh : )

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