Ah! That is so freaky! It's not one of those late night stories I'm telling ya! Ah! But that was done so amazingly. I have to admit it was great even if it was weird. Anyway, great stuff!

That's interesting... Are you going to update it? It looks like a mystery that's waiting to be solved to me!! Please Update! I want to know what happens!... although the way it ends here... you do say what happens next, don't you?Masterful; very well written!

I find it kind of forced, and there isnt much suspense or horror. Plus, the speaking isnt clear to understand. Maybe you should extend the story, including more desciption and suspense. ;)