|Reviews for Poems of Pain|
| in theory 2/28/06 . chapter 1
I've come across you before, I'm sure I have (bleh I KNOW I have!). Your bio was so interesting, I'm a dreamer too (I wrote down a transcript kinda type thing of one of my dreams, "Urchin.")
Your style is so crisp, I'd review all of this but I'm at college in a lesson right now so I'll scoot now and finish up later.
| glamorous-giggly-guy 1/14/06 . chapter 10
I...You're telling my story with that poem! Betrayal is a foul, loathsome, hurtful, spiteful, horribe thing! Forgive them though, just don't give anymore to them. Forgive them for yourself, not them. For closure. I speak from expierience. Good poem, no great poem, I'm adding it to my faevs
| glamorous-giggly-guy 1/14/06 . chapter 9
:( I love your metaphores. Alot! They're great. Really good. But, so sad...:(
| glamorous-giggly-guy 1/14/06 . chapter 8
o_0 your mother? Oh no! I...good poem...*worries more*
| glamorous-giggly-guy 1/14/06 . chapter 7
Again, I can really relate. Its like your soul's being suffocated, right? Great poem.
| glamorous-giggly-guy 1/14/06 . chapter 6
Intense. Love it. Excellent. REally, you have an amazing gift for words!
| glamorous-giggly-guy 1/14/06 . chapter 5
Oh man! I can so relate to this one. Really good job-
| glamorous-giggly-guy 1/14/06 . chapter 4
:( Heavy stuff. Again brilliant, but...well you DID say you were over it...*worries*
| glamorous-giggly-guy 1/14/06 . chapter 3
*Hugs* my friend, waht the hell happened to make you feel all these things! *Plans to hunt down and kill them* The poetry is, dare I say as always, great. But damn, don't let someone do that to you again...
| glamorous-giggly-guy 1/14/06 . chapter 2
This reminds me strangley of Evanescence and their latest album, Anywhere But Home...Again really well done. I'm also glad you got all theese emotions onto paper and not bottled up. You're too talented to be bottling up emotions.
| glamorous-giggly-guy 1/14/06 . chapter 1
Oh wow! I likies alot! Wow wow wow! Uh...well done. Damn you're talented.
| LittleMidgett 1/10/06 . chapter 9
Interesting...like the whole bit with the glass and all...very cool...
Glad you don't feel like that anymore...at times...:P...I think...I dunno what I'm saying...oops...
| Faerie Energy 1/10/06 . chapter 9
Ohh, I love the imagery when you're talking about being pressed up against glass... Wonderfully dark. Great work.
With all due respect,
| Sakura Reyna 12/13/05 . chapter 8
Poems with no titles are okay. My mother is same way...
| Sakura Reyna 12/13/05 . chapter 7
...breathless and yet beautiful