I'm guessing you were depressed and perhaps, a tad bit morbid when you wrote this but I like!! the peoms you write give a nice dark feeling- you say my poems crep you out- heck yours are even better! they freak me out and i want more !! lol

Wow, I like this one A LOT. "Your lips are a disaster

Cuz red wounds heal faster

Than a kiss that was aimed to miss" Those lines are great. and this part "Run

Witch

Run" Wow. You have talent.

the flow is brilliant and very sharp.