"is she more trouble than she's worth??" are you calling me troublesome my dear?? and you made it sound as though you'd continue with this one then FLOOF! you're caught up with other things. ah well, you do have a lot of stories going, so I won't nag too much... but I wanted to see where you were going with it... and I'm going to get that next chapter of mine up... theres not much of interest in the thread going in the next time... pretty soon I'm going to skip to that part where I have to go away for a few days if it doesn't pick up.

This is cute so far. The chapters are really short and there's a lot of jumping around without explaining, but it's cute nonetheless.

*crys* NOO! I think I know why Garen...I meant Carrot...won't marry another girl. It's because...*spoiler faerie covers Ginny's mouth so she can't reveal anything* Grawr. Stupid spoiler fairy. She is so obsessed with this little thing called "suprise." Weird little thing she is. Anywho, Carrot is such an a good character. He is soo cool. Since he is Garen, he is even cooler. Now...*thinks* where does New York fit into all of this?? *ponders* I dunno. *frowns* One thing though, what it the world does "in the name of apples" mean? I've heard weird phrases before Garen, but this one is plain odd. Maybe I'm just slow... I dunno. O. That rhymed. Hehehe. Okay, so now that I made myself seem like a crack addict, I think I should depart. Great chapter, Garen! Glad he got rid of Forsythia...I mean, what a shame! ^_^ I still say Garen should have been with Maggie. Why did she have to die?! *spoiler faerie appears and realizes she is to late* Hahaha. I finally beat that accursed fairy. it's about time. *spoiler faerie flies away, very angry with Ginny* Oh, come back! Argh, forget it. I should enjoy the time away from that blasted creature. *rock falls from nowhere and hits Ginny on the head* Ow! Grawr! I have to go strangle a certain fairy. I'll be back later...-*-Truth. Truth like a blazing fire. An eternal flame.-*--*-GiNnY-*-

A self-insert is never a good idea.

I'm so sorry I didn't review the previous chapter! But I loved this one. It was so cute! Carrot...I still can't get over it. It's just too funny. Garen...Garen Connelly...Garen Maxwell...Ruy...Carrot...Whistler...So many aliases! *sobs* I'll never get it right. I think I'll stick to plain Garen, since everything else is just to hard to remember. Well, Whistler is easier, since I use that name constantly... but whatever. Great chapter. And I love the story already. ^_^ Oh, and I have to ask you something. Do you hate me? Answer me that sometime...please and thank you!-*-Your Insane Friend(Erm,hopefully!)-*--*-GiNnY-*-

Good story. I really like it.