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CRaZy-OdIN 8/14/06 . chapter 1Very sweet and happy go-lucky, I like it. Its very easy to be angsty and sad in poetry and stuff, but its so hard to write happy sometimes. and well I like it :) keep it up, and your welcome for all the reviews, its only fair, you've reviewed so many of mine, it's rude for me not to return the favor _ hehe. take care x |
gummibared 2/15/06 . chapter 1:3 -Great happy little poem. Loved the wording, and the rhyming was awesome! gummi |
Moosher 1/20/06 . chapter 1Aw! That was really sweet.. Like the rhyming. It feels like whenever I rhyme I sound childish and immature, though your rhyming isn't like that at all. I can so imagine finding this on a hallmark greeting card.. for some reason.. Makes me smile. Your whole point eh? P Nice job.. Write on! -Meme |
Aquafied 12/13/05 . chapter 1its so positive, its drowning thats just cause i feel when people are uber positive, they are being fake and not maybe they are just super doubtful as said. |
Arichos 12/11/05 . chapter 1:) |
SeaVoi 12/11/05 . chapter 1This poem sounds to motivated! lol, but I do like the message! |
Suicidal Skies 12/11/05 . chapter 1This is sugary cute. Adorable, just...adorable. |
Abby Sequioa 12/11/05 . chapter 1aw... this is ADORABLE! So inspiring... |
Wishdreamer89 12/11/05 . chapter 1Aw, Sweet. Puts you in a good mood with it's cheerfulness and fun rhyming sceme. I like the "Just give a smile" at the end too, perfect way to end this. Cya! Wishdreamer |
Archipelago 12/11/05 . chapter 1Ah, its cute. Makes me feel bad for frowning always though. Meh. |
SayIt'sWrong 12/11/05 . chapter 1I like this. Very inspiring and deep. I like the ending too. Good work. QueenVixta |
sunday night sky 12/11/05 . chapter 1:D sweet poem. nice work. |
The Postscript 12/11/05 . chapter 1Cute with a priceless message too. Keep writing. |