I love the writing style. The plot is really good too, And I admire the short time you require to finish it. So, yeahs. Keep writing.

I can honestly say this is the most original pirate story I've ever read. I've only ever heard or read a tale from the eyes of the captain, and this is refreshing to say the least. Very well done.

Wow. i have got to say, i read this story without pause, and i have got to say that for your age (don't mean to offend) your story was amazing. the plotline, and descriptions were astounding, and your characters aren't flat, you can really picture them as real people. Your grammer was amazing, only a few mistakes that i took the time to notice, and i fell in love with captain shane by the end of the story. The only thing i was wondering was the language that they would be using, it seems that their speech would be a bit more old-fashioned, but, again, i love this story. DEFINETLY going in my favorites as soon as i stop acting lazy and log in. You have amazing talent! Do not stop! :D

MirrorMirrorOnTheWall

thats kind of harsh.
its like giving him a very bad ultimatum :(
kill people, become a murderer or ill leave type thing XD lol.
but i still loved the story :D

wow. great way to impress a lady :D

As I am sure that my previous comments about your stories did not go unnoticed, I will not restate them. However, to answer the "question" you posed at the beginning of the story and your problem with it, I felt I had to say this much. You did a wonderful job writing as a man. I am, once more dazzled by your talent.
Lots of Love,
Emi

aww i love this story. lol and i love sailing, so to me, this is like the perfect story. you did an excellent job to write the whole thing in a guys point of view. great job!

another great story!! yays! pls continue to write more! hahas!

Such a gorgeous story

too stunned by the end to really know what to say... wow. so glad he saved her though. i rememeber something in the talking about how he would hate to see her go down by being captured or something. great job

i love the ending!

Thank you for such a beautiful story! I wasn't quite sure what to expect going into this, but you definately exceeded all my expectations! Congrats to you!

wonderful story. I read it all at once. Great job . keep writing!

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i have read your work for ages and this story is exceptional, you are such a talented writer.

Aww. I really like this story. Good work!