i thought this was good. i envy you so much, you have no idea. you can write about so many things, & i just write about... stupid emotional shit. i liked this. : )

I don't know much about these forms and various types of poems.. but I think I get the gist of it. I do like it, though )

"Even though it was always today.." - I just really like that line, it captures something of the quickness of time.. and other things.. In whole, the piece is very good, and the rhythm fits very well. Amazing rhyme scheme and such. Good work.