That was rather profound. Pretty good though. You did an awesome job! :D

OMG. thats so sad :(
its eerie, but i love it.
its got a sense of perfect XDD
does that even make sense? lol

I LOVE THIS!! ive always had a heart for vampires looking for lost love. this was the best. so sad, and yet so romantic. the feeling of true love is in this one shot. I love this.

It's a little morbid for me, but oddly enough I think I like it. Its a really great one shot.

this was the best vampire story i've read in ages! it wasnt too sappy, but just right...it even made me cry at the end, wow! i always enjoy a vampire looking for his lost love through the decades, and yours finds such perfect tone and diction for everything. certainly a great piece!:)

Aw. That was so sweet and so hauntingly romantic. I figured she might be a reincarnation. And then him choosing to die so that he could join them. This is so beautiful.

Cheers for that. Made my day.

Peace,

Tanika

thats so sweet in a haunting sort of wasy but not really! i thought that was one of the most entrancing stories ive read so far!! well good luck on your future pieces of literature

Very well writen.. Kinda confusing but it made some sense in the end. Morbid actually. And sad. A bit of it all really. I loved it.

-s

Hey... srry i really don't feel like logging in right now. anyway do really have to say my opinion on this.. ...

ya ya shutup!... u coke addict...

love it!I love Vampires!

not the hairy people! lol