whoah that waz real good, it's one of the best stories i''ve read in a while, i don't often go onto this site because some of the stories are bad but yours was real good one or two spelling mistakes but who really cares?

Hiya, i just read your first chapter and it was like fab! i totally loved it and if you don't right more i'm a comin' after you with a chainsaw! Luv ya, Jessie!

OMG, wow this is amazing stuff aleatz, whoever you are,(mysterious music begins). I have a feeling i know whats going to happen to our poor little Jason here! :):):) Good bye plot line! It alls begins in this chapter, where Jason walks into his home, thats right his home, and finds his grandfather DEAD! (end mysterious music, begin western music). What will poor little Jason do, maybe enter a fight that could leave him bleeding on the ground in very very hurtful pain after being dumped by his best friend who he thourght was his girlfriend?! Oh NO I GAVE AWAY THE PLOT LINE! just joking ppl, but i bet you knew that! :):):):):):):):):):):) Well anyways, this is absolutely fantastic stuff Aleatz, whoever you are. May i point out that sometimes you spell words wrong, but i find that a good excuse is to say you were speed typing!! Yes, that's right, speed typing, it makes you look really cool and smart and sofisticated but it allows room for error. I have a great thing you could put for your next chapter aleatz, whoever you are! As i believe that you have run out of ideas for your next chapter, as this one is so full and exciting of great ideas that maybe you could introduce another death. That's right!! Of our poor little Jason here. Look forward to reading the death of Jason in your next chapter! Happy honika! (P.S. i can't spell either! But i can spell better than you!) See you in the future! :):):):):):):) :(:(:(:(:(:

HELLO REO. I LOVE IT. YOU HAVE A GREAT IMAGINATION AND SHOW ALOT OF POTENTIAL. i CANT WAIT FOR THE NEXT INSTALMENT. KEEP ON TYPINGLEXIE-POTTER