This was great and easy to relate to. I love then ending and always counting on the seasons to stay the same and be constant. I liked the lines, "Friendships were strong

And love was never wrong". Well written, I enjoyed reading :)

oh, this is just so beautiful...i always wish for the same.

This is so sweet and I can really relate to it. Very bittersweet and touching. Good job

Gosh, you just ruined my next couple uploads with this! XDI'll upload them later anyway.

I love the captured emotion in here, the sudden and very light hint of threat was present and the past memories were simply delightful. Magnificent work here and the ending was lighthearted.

Trinity

First of all I enjoyed the poem. I don't write much poetry and don't think I'm very good when I do make an attempt. Anyways, I know what you mean about wanting things to stay the same. That poem really got me thinking about when I was a child. Keep writing

true emotion is evident here. the general simplicity of this adds to the remembering an earlier time and place as if you were remembering them while these things were occuring. great narritive and capturing of the spirit in the words.