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| The-Account 2006-01-15 ch 1,  | abuseThank you! I love the sequel! I enjoyed it a lot. I thought the ending was funny. Thanks for writing a sequel! I love this! |
| Sabrina 2006-01-06 ch 1, anon. | abuseDude, i swear your getting me into this type of "reading" lol ... it's hot! I pictured you know who and his brother and i just laughed ... that makes me wonder ...lol! |
| Cherise 2005-12-27 ch 1, anon. | abuseThere's my lemony scene I so desired! I hope you know that this has made me so happy, especially since you basically cheated us out on one in the first part. |
| wacky-tarz 2005-12-13 ch 1, | abusehey!! Wow, they actually did it! And Kle not really being drunk?! Thats insane! Crazy fool...why pretend when he knew he could get it anyway? Anyway, good follow up! It made me grin evilly to hear them still talk about going to church, even after everything that they'd done or were going to do. Good work!! |
| Tinker101 2005-12-12 ch 1, | abuseLoved both of them. Its hard to find a good smut writer. lol |
| dyers-eve 2005-12-12 ch 1, | abuseYay! they ** "dances" You should do this story from the beginning or something, i think that would be awesome. Your adoring fan x |
| Sacred-Phoenix-Nephthys 2005-12-12 ch 1, | abuseI LOVED IT!! I need to get lessons from you when it comes to writing these kind of scenes...coz one has 2 be in my story...someteim...lol, neways, yeah i honestly loved this a lot and i hope there is a 3rd coming out soon? Lemme no if there is ^_^ |
| Bmcvay 2005-12-12 ch 1, | abuseHey. I really did enjoythe story. I have to admit though that on first glance of the title, with out seeing the first story, I thought it was going to be a straight couple.Guess I was wrong. *grins* In any case, please keep writing, and as far as sex sceens go, I'm not very good at writing them but I thought it was decently done |