*in an oddly childish voice* I like it, it's sexy.

good song do you have a melody for it yet. I love the chorus keep writing.:)

dramatic...sounds like another song but hey, i got nothing against you.. juz crossed my mind.

but i like it, yeah i can somehow relate but not in my own experience..

xxKIMIxx

Great poem. Amazing symbolism. I really liked this piece. And don't be so hard on yourself! I don't know your situation, but I'm sure if he/she really cares about you they can overlook the past. Or help you if the problem is still in the present.