|Reviews for Somethin Fierce|
| young and the reckless 6/8/09 . chapter 1
ah, this is so new age, and i love it.
the second stanza and the line, "he wears name brand love on his sleeve,"
is just so poetically blunt. great job.
| One-Hand Clap 3/31/08 . chapter 1
How pretty. Starkly poetic. The beauty in this story is its despairing romanticism. It ties in with your name - 'Faithless Juliet'. It's sad and - I hate this word but it suits - bittersweet. "Father of a million fainting girls" - that's like milk to me, it's just a gorgeous phrase. I'm off to check out more of your work. This is definitely favourited.
| bittersweet.season 11/3/07 . chapter 1
this is beautiful. not superfluous at all, and really frank. i like it.
| Tytherpol 8/2/07 . chapter 1
this is really good.
| a Leader by Default 12/19/06 . chapter 1
How good was this!
| Kouichi 8/8/06 . chapter 1
Yet another brilliant poem.
| evm 3/22/06 . chapter 1
Your rhythm is wonderful, like a steady beat of rain. It caught me up and tossed me around so that I was tangled in all of your beautiful phrases. This is so gorgeous. My favourites were the repetition of the lines begining with 'Romeo said:' and 'Something else. Something Vain. A boy without a train of thought.' All in all, this is wonderful.
| sunshineofyourlife 3/16/06 . chapter 1
oh wow. wow. that's all i can say. this is amazing. beautiful.
| Margot Tenenbaum 2/9/06 . chapter 1
you are .
| SarahJaneDrkAngl05 1/14/06 . chapter 1
this is good i cannot find the words to describe it!SarahJane
| pneumothorax 1/14/06 . chapter 1
I can't decide if this is negative or positive. There's something very odd in his words. Too much hoping on the speaker's part.
| Guest 1/8/06 . chapter 1
i love that line: reasoning's that he bought on sale at an outlet store. He wears name brand love on his sleeve. )
| les petits bateaux 1/6/06 . chapter 1
A very impressive piece of work you got here. It's very different from all the others that I've read from other poets. Very well done.
| AshGurl2897 12/30/05 . chapter 1
Wow. You have quite the body of work on here. It's very impressive indeed. I liked this very much. The disjointedness was nice and helped to get the idea across. Alright, I am off to read and possibly review some more of your poems.
| Tr APeze-sWiNGer 12/28/05 . chapter 1
it's bittersweet...i like the use of (somethin fierce) without the "g" at the end. i picture romeo like elvis? anyways, nicely done. really well-written.
p. reading your review of "bob dylan and green carpet..." i realized that you're right, it does end at a weird place, and i never saw that before. so thank you, for pointing that out to me, because i'm going fix it and give it a proper ending now.