ah, this is so new age, and i love it.

the second stanza and the line, "he wears name brand love on his sleeve,"

is just so poetically blunt. great job.

How pretty. Starkly poetic. The beauty in this story is its despairing romanticism. It ties in with your name - 'Faithless Juliet'. It's sad and - I hate this word but it suits - bittersweet. "Father of a million fainting girls" - that's like milk to me, it's just a gorgeous phrase. I'm off to check out more of your work. This is definitely favourited.

this is beautiful. not superfluous at all, and really frank. i like it.

this is really good.

How good was this!

perfection.

(fierce)

Yet another brilliant poem.

Your rhythm is wonderful, like a steady beat of rain. It caught me up and tossed me around so that I was tangled in all of your beautiful phrases. This is so gorgeous. My favourites were the repetition of the lines begining with 'Romeo said:' and 'Something else. Something Vain. A boy without a train of thought.' All in all, this is wonderful.

oh wow. wow. that's all i can say. this is amazing. beautiful.

-sunshine

you are .

this is good i cannot find the words to describe it!SarahJane

I can't decide if this is negative or positive. There's something very odd in his words. Too much hoping on the speaker's part.

i love that line: reasoning's that he bought on sale at an outlet store. He wears name brand love on his sleeve. )

A very impressive piece of work you got here. It's very different from all the others that I've read from other poets. Very well done.

Wow. You have quite the body of work on here. It's very impressive indeed. I liked this very much. The disjointedness was nice and helped to get the idea across. Alright, I am off to read and possibly review some more of your poems.

it's bittersweet...i like the use of (somethin fierce) without the "g" at the end. i picture romeo like elvis? anyways, nicely done. really well-written.

p. reading your review of "bob dylan and green carpet..." i realized that you're right, it does end at a weird place, and i never saw that before. so thank you, for pointing that out to me, because i'm going fix it and give it a proper ending now.