the mixed feelings between holding on and letting them live their life is very well expressed here, can feel a real honest tone about this poem. _ keep it up

It's not great or anything, but it's an averagely decent poem. Very sweet. Good work.

with all due respect,Faerie Energy

aw... quite endearing in a way touching good work

keep writing!

Intense and really well-written! I picture this girl at her knees with emotions bubbling out and holding her leaving bf by the leg. You've done this well. And back to you on Merry Christmas!

lol I loved it. Whether you that it was good are not, it was wonderful. Nice rythme. I liked your words. It was just good. Keep it up!

God bless, Lakoria

You give a real good point of view here with the girl. I like it alot, as it conveys a good feeling of both sadness and love.

beautiful etched in sorrow.

I liked the poem, I don't get why you said you thought it was not all that great, I liked it!

i love it, really it isnt too rhyming and still flows mature and stately.

you capture this so well.

i sound like such a woman when i say this and i'm a guy, but, Iv'e been there, feeling like my ex was leaving me when i was falling in love with her. I've been hurt so many times, I'm a lot more reserved then i should be and it bothers me. good work, very emotional, very powerful.

I enjoyed this poem, it's really heartfelt and touching, enjoyed it!