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| FreezingFire 2005-12-12 ch 1, | Wow, that's such a sad piece. The imagery is phenomenal and you really manage to convey a strong, melancholy feel to the poem. |
| Gabriel Lyman 2005-12-12 ch 1, | wow the death imagery here is strong and sad, its kicking y mempathic side right in the chest, and actually causing me pain. The emotions you convey and strength of them are heartbreaking and heartfelt, and almost deadly. Good work for sucha passionate piece. |