Amazing, truly amazing.

I cannot believe the power you put into this. I hope you will continue to write your most memorable poems.

~ Cactus

PS: I liked the poem you used in your profile, by the way.

I can see this working well in the form of a short story, or whatever prose you want. It feels a bit lacking vividness to be in poetry. That's just me though. It's a strongly emotional sentiment no matter how it's expressed.