It just got better as it went along and the ending was just like WHOA. It was deep, but clever at the same time. I also rather like "air made cubic," as that's just SO your style of description. :)

magical and abstract, great painting of memory lane! You looked at life eye to eye. wow!

lots of smiles, raspberry twirl

p.s. thank you for your review!

Wow, I agree that the ending is just POW! in your face. Gorgeous poem. You have talent! Keep writing! :)

Thanks for the review-I like this poem. And don't fret about imaging... i do it, too. I can just make fun of it.

wow the ending hits you so hard.

I love you, I love this, and don't you love how poetry can make the smallest things seem so wonderful? Or rather, it expresses their innate wonder, which the poet is fortunate enough to see, and the reader fortunate enough to see through the poet's eyes. I am glad to be your reader :-P.

The religion of our bodies; nature, air, water, life. I think when we open our eyes wide enough we could see God (in whatever form or shape Godliness takes.)

Juliet.