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| like a lover 2006-01-11 ch 1,  | abusean attempt?? girl this is GORGEOUS. I'm totally in love with it. please never try to excuse your amazing/breathtaking/intoxicating writing ♥ |
| in tesseraction 2006-01-02 ch 1, | abusea delicious amount of room to interpret. lovexcore (!1) pink floyd reference at the end? or none whatsoever? |
| eighteen hundred 2006-01-02 ch 1, | abuseI liked this. Nice images, good feeling to it. |
| Haberdasher 2006-01-01 ch 1, | abusethe beginning is magnificent although it kind of fades nearer to the end. i like to scan your work from time to time. havent done it in a while, i see youve changed ur name. happy new year! - the Lady Elaine |
| crinkled aster ribbon 2005-12-30 ch 1, | abusewondering if I like fairy(fly)-minced flowers/and autopsies on (brain-)damaged sheep. i like how the ending seems random, but somehow it fits. i really admire the whole of this poem, actually. |
| simpleplan13 2005-12-24 ch 1, | abuseinteresting.. cool format.. very abstract and well done |
| hoowdoideletethisaccount 2005-12-24 ch 1, | abuseHuh? Haha, sometimes I feel so stupid when I read poetry. I know the whole point of poetry is the symbolism and evasiveness, in some sense. This one makes sense to me, except for the last line. I'm not sure what it has to do with anything ;) I love your descriptions, though. They're elaborate, but effortless. Nicely done!! |
| dusk orchid 2005-12-20 ch 1, | abuseHm... this is quite interesting. Sort of like an abstract, detached feeling. The images you chose can be interpreted in many ways. Nice piece. |
| ShadesofBlue69 2005-12-19 ch 1, | abuseweird, but delicate, i like it alot. |
| Unready 2005-12-18 ch 1, | abuseconfusing to me @.@ |
| sloppy firsts 2005-12-17 ch 1, | abusepretty. |
| Aquafied 2005-12-13 ch 1, | abusehah, the title tickles me. stardust is such a beautiful image.smeared throughout the sky.faries and fairies. |
| AboveTheSalt 2005-12-13 ch 1, | abusei like this. i like the word combination and the ideas it brings to mind. you could definitely expand on this if you so choose. |
| after-sex cigarette 2005-12-13 ch 1, | abusecrazycool imagery. |
| as beauty dies 2005-12-13 ch 1, | abuseyou.are.so.sweet I fangirl you shamelessly now. lovely, lovely, lovely. this is such an amazing poem. so beautiful and pretty in only ways you can make it plausable. lovely, lovely, lovely. ~* noelle |