Reviews for Conventional Love

Reviews For: Conventional Love - Reviews: Page 1 of 9

Jumping-Loveliness 2007-10-30 ch 22,	abuseWell as you already know from our e-mails and the many reviews I left you on animespiral before...this is always going to be my favorite story! I just thought I should comment on here as well, seeing as I just remember my fictionpress name...don't ask about it either XD I'm trying to e-mail you back, so I should have one to you soon (if it'll work). -Kayla-
Goddess of the writings 2006-09-29 ch 1,	abuseGood Story. I'll post more w/ creative advice after i read the entire story
M.E.R.A.E 2006-07-06 ch 2,	abuseI think you just captured me in your main character...except in peruvian and not colombian.o.o oh and can I just point something out. Latin's are not the same as hispanics. Latin's are from europe, Latinos which is basically the same thing would be a better term to use.
bluemoon89 2006-06-04 ch 22,	abuseaww i just loved ur story especially the ending. I cant wait for ur next story!! =)
Matet 2006-06-01 ch 22,	abusegoodness gracious! that was a terrific and sweet story! I CAN'T WAIT FOR THE SEQUEL! great job with the story once again. i couldn't ask for a better story. XD
itse 2006-05-30 ch 1,	abusehey, great intro.actually just wanted to say i was looking at ur profile and just aying im final fantasy obsessed and i luv CLoud and Squalldid u c advent children?
itse 2006-05-30 ch 22,	abusewow im sad to c conventional love go, so u r working on a sequel? good luck with that.luv if u cld check out some of my ficsr u still working on holy wolf?
Michael 2006-05-28 ch 1, anon.	abuseIt was a fairly good story, even though the first kiss was a bit late :P There were a few things that bugged me, though; 1) You wrote "perfect" or "perfectly" too much, eventually it was getting annoying at how many things were perfect. 2) You confused "seat" and "sit" 3) You also confused "there" and "their" 4) Lastly, you had quite a few spelling and grammer mistakes, might want to have someone spell-check your writing before submitting it... Otherwise, it was a nice story
ani18 2006-05-26 ch 22,	abuseI almost cried. I love this story so much. I'm happy that Leon and Karen are finally together and Karen has a great boyfriend. It's good that Chelsie and Peter are finally together too. It was so sweet how Leon gave Karen his mothers necklace. I'm happy that you finished this story with a great ending. Kudos to you for excellent writing. I'm not really a fan of sequels but I may check out Unconventional Love because I love your writing.
Slander By Osmosis 2006-05-26 ch 22,	abuseAh, so that's the end? That was superb! ^_^ That was a really great ending. I'm so glad Leon gave Karen that necklace... But this was a really sweet story and I can hardly wait until "Unconventional Love!" ^_^ - Lithely
Slander By Osmosis 2006-05-26 ch 21,	abuseIt's about time that they kissed! ^_^ Really cute chapter. Onto the next! - Lithely
swyen 2006-05-25 ch 22,	abusegreat story! can't wait to read more of you stuff :)
Cel M. 2006-05-24 ch 22,	abuseWonderful story. You're an amazing writer dude. I can't wait for you to write more stories, lol. Good job dude. -- Celie
kneeknew 2006-05-22 ch 21, anon.	abuseMaryJane1913! you really ROCK!! The anime feature of your story really captures a different, a more unique style of a love story splashed in a modern rock band atmosphere with a dab of classic aura... hahay! i cant describe how this story really intrigues me... anxiously awaiting for the next chapters to come out... my friends would usually ask me what im into these days... i said "Im into Friction Press" ... I should object that the literary pieces here are "for the girls only"... coz a guy like me makes me come back for more.. and i even got a few more friends get hooked up to your story and to Friction Press in General. Good Luck!
itse 2006-05-21 ch 21,	abuseYay! (claps hands) finally LEon and Karen!! (wolf whistles) so is this the last chapter?

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