LOL, I just read this story again and was like, 'hey, cool story, has potential...and the author seems to know me..wait a minute, I read the first chapter a while ago and reviewed!' hehe, still can't wait to see who the stranger who's going to come to save her is- and you'd better introduce him soon! :)

Good story, keep it going and try to expand on your chapters. I find that they are short, and leave me needing more info. But otherwise I want to read more :D

merry xmas kels ;)

you should take off the setting that blocks anonymous reviews - sometimes people won't review because they aren't signed in and are too damned lazy to do so for a review.

+ the first paragraph wasn't spaced out which made it hard to read. (this doesn't mean you need to space out every sentence like I did *grin)

ok, curiosity killed the cat. Or the reviwer. One or the other. Hopefully not the second. haha I am extremely curious as to your story, and I think it's got real potential. I liked the insight/inner dialogue of Seria (btw, cool name) and can't wait to read more. Please update soon! xx Carmen

you should definitely continue! great work :D i think it needs editing a bit cause there are a few typos, but its still great :D