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| ronshaberry 2005-12-29 ch 1,  | abuseHi! Just as great as the last time I read it, of course. Vividly depicted, great narration. Those flashbacks are something beautiful. Good job, anyway! |
| AzNDrEAmEr77 2005-12-18 ch 1, | abusepoor guy...me like the detail and and and and the way u express the mood (ENGLISH CLASS! *gasps*) sorry i'm acting a bit like...spazzy right now, but it really is good-as usual, my dahling |
| Nikailyn Wright 2005-12-13 ch 1, | abuseAwesome. Astounding job. Welcome to my Favorite Stories List! Only one outstanding error:"My family-my precious wife and beautiful little children-is dead" I'm pretty sure it's "are." |