|Reviews for Better|
| a silenced revolution 3/10/07 . chapter 1
Like the metaphors in the first and second stanzas. Good job.
| Flies 3/3/06 . chapter 1
Which is not really true, but in so many cases it's hard to tell why things like "love" even matter. So I can understand it. You seemed to be in a consise-to-the-point poetry sort of roll... I'm liking it.
| sloppy firsts 12/18/05 . chapter 1
leaves a bittersweet taste. good work.