continue, please and thank you? xD

this is pretty good. you really need to conti ue
btw u have many grammatical errors
-laces luver

Hey, your lack of work habits turns me on, too. :) I laughed at that line for about an hour. Then I remembered I was boiling tea. Not a smart move...Anyway, why haven't you updated, woman? :( (unhappy)

omigod, this is so cool. i love the idea behind this all and the catchy wit.

anw, i've just read your profile and it's so fascinating! i LOVE the quotes.

oh yeah, about the story:
YOU MUST UPDATE.
:)

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great story! its been a long time since i found a story that sends me to sugar high. heheheheh

ok, awesome job! update soon!

What's stresh?

Since my last review was longer and since it's really late 3, I'll just stop the review here...

Well...my old school was kinda like that...there was a bell that rang 7 minutes before the class ended...Then the bell would signify that the class was over...4 minutes to get to your next class and it would ring to start the next class...

The school I go to now is really wierd...The only bells we have are for fire drills and what not...Other than that you just watch that clock...It's extremly bizarre and for the first month every single freshman wears a watch and glances at it obsessivly...

Lenglacknavoli...How's that for a last name? He was a couple years older than me...And it was a great joke among the teachers that none of them could quite pronounce his last name...

Oh see my thing for guys is their eyes...Waht about you? Are you like Lisa, going for guys with great hair or do you appreciate other assests?

Hm...Let's see...Didn't Sylvia say something about her older brother Adam? Possible connection? I'd bet on it...

Darn it...I don't really have any friends to obsess over yet...Although Lance is awfully cute...And good with kids...Two bonus points there...Although I suppose the kid thing is only important later in life...

I was going to say I'm pretty much in the same boat there except I don't really have a reson like she does...

Ooh, I love this story! Only it seems that Lisa and Lily are a little more unaffected by Megan's death than maybe they should be. But then again, it HAS been two years. I love Mark...he's probably my favourite character, after maybe Lance. I like Lily's sarcasm, too. This is really good stuff. Update soon!

Hey there! This is my second choice! I haven't read the other ones but if you want me to, I will - if you read my other ones as well! LOL! Just kidding. Anyway, I can't say much about Adam right now... I need to get into his head! Hahaha! There are some parts - I think it was chapter 2 - where I think you scrambled the names e.g. I think you meant Mark but you said Sean. It would really make me happier if your chapters were longer though!

hey there! an update, yey! lolanyways i enjoyed it a lot even if it was kinda short. haha I love mark he's so random and cool and freaky sometimes. anyways i'm really excited about seeing where you take this!

(oh and thanks for the review you left me. i'm actually working on a story featuring the chaarcters of that essay i wrote.)

Cool chapter, but I will like it more if there's more interaction between Lily and Adam XD And I was thinking, maybe Sylvia will come back... yeah... to taunt Lily, heh.

love,

~carbons

...haha...very nice start!

I like this better than the last one. At least Adam shows some emotion towards Lily. The last one, he was just... there, you know.

"He was just as amused with Sean and Lisa as I was." That's supposed to be Mark, not Sean, right?

Anyway, love it, update soon =)

~carbons