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Reviews For: The Dreamer, with the Pale Blue Eyes

dreameratbang
2008-09-30
ch 1,
Wonderfully emotional and dark. Also beautifully written with lovely imagery, it was beautiful!
J.E.Wyatt
2006-07-27
ch 1,
Wow, what an amazing poem. It flowed so beautifully . . .it's jsut amazing!! Ican just picture everything as I read this poem. Bravo!
I like makin' poems but i s...
2006-07-11
ch 1,
It's so beautiful...
Fancy
2005-12-14
ch 1,
This is entirely too pretty to end so soon! I might just have been studying for finals too much, but this reminds me of... Edmumd Spenser's Faery Queen. Or maybe Keats's Eve of Saint Agnes. Or something. I don't know what it reminds me of, just that it reminds me of something that ought to be stanzas and stanzas long. =) Nonetheless, I am also quite fond of it as it is, which is to say: concise, well-rhymed, well-put-together, and haunting.
Night
2005-12-14
ch 1,
Whoo! Didn't have to log in!

(^_^)> (^_^)>(^_^)> (^_^)>

o.O; Enough of that...

This poem was so cool Kiki! I am left speachless... it's awsomeness has no description..

~Night~
les petits bateaux
2005-12-13
ch 1,
A very sorrowful and touching piece. I like the way you delve into her woes and how she felt the pain. Very emotional, yet hard as concrete as well.

~~Trinity
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