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| dreameratbang 2008-09-30 ch 1, | Wonderfully emotional and dark. Also beautifully written with lovely imagery, it was beautiful! |
| J.E.Wyatt 2006-07-27 ch 1, | Wow, what an amazing poem. It flowed so beautifully . . .it's jsut amazing!! Ican just picture everything as I read this poem. Bravo! |
| I like makin' poems but i s... 2006-07-11 ch 1, | It's so beautiful... |
| Fancy 2005-12-14 ch 1, | This is entirely too pretty to end so soon! I might just have been studying for finals too much, but this reminds me of... Edmumd Spenser's Faery Queen. Or maybe Keats's Eve of Saint Agnes. Or something. I don't know what it reminds me of, just that it reminds me of something that ought to be stanzas and stanzas long. =) Nonetheless, I am also quite fond of it as it is, which is to say: concise, well-rhymed, well-put-together, and haunting. |
| Night 2005-12-14 ch 1, | Whoo! Didn't have to log in! (^_^)> (^_^)>(^_^)> (^_^)> o.O; Enough of that... This poem was so cool Kiki! I am left speachless... it's awsomeness has no description.. ~Night~ |
| les petits bateaux 2005-12-13 ch 1, | A very sorrowful and touching piece. I like the way you delve into her woes and how she felt the pain. Very emotional, yet hard as concrete as well. ~~Trinity |