this is the sweetest story ever, i love it.

omg ! i love the story soo far... at first i thought the entire story was going to be about them getting into a relationship but i love how you've gone a step futher and are showing the difficulties they fe isace together ! You're writing stlye is very good :D
keep up the good work *thumbs up*
(and please write the next chapter soon)

WOW!! this last chapter is so much better written than the beginning! You've really improved since the first chapter, and added a lot of emotion. I thought this would be an iffy cliched romance story, but boy was I wrong!! Keep on writing, and UPDATE SOON! Christy
PS Again, update super soon, please! :)

OHMYGOSH! You can't just leave us stranded here! Carter, what have you done?! First it's Melody messing up, now it's him, T__T They are beginning to grow on me a lot too. I love all of the characters,Kayleigh and Kenzie and of course-Carter and Melody.I'm sad that the next chapter's the last one,but the character development is superb and I can't wait for the next at the same time I dread for it to end the story. My gosh I love this story, if I were logged in I'd set it to Story Alert and Fav Story and Fav Author immediately. Cuz' that's how good it is.

OMG NO WAY!
you must fix this lol
i love them together!
hope u update soon

That is another really evil place to stop. *grumbles* Seriously, how unfair are you? I guess it's not so bad because you update very frequently and it's really long.

I loved it. And I'm so glad that Melody has finally told him she loves him. Now, she needs to hear it back, not be sent home. I yelled at him all morning while I was getting ready for my classes. My mother and sister looked at me like I had finally lost my mind.

PMS!!

~Katie

aw, this wass really nice! melody was so sweet and carter was a little **-ish at the end, but it's okay... can't wait for the next chapter

okay, i'll review all the chapters once i get the time... but that was so not cool! here i was, all innocent and looking for a cool college set story to read. and i get done with chapter 19... AND THERE'S NO MORE! THAT IS SO NOT COOL!

i loved it though. Melody and her problems are so relatable, even for us "working class" people, lol.

PMVS!

Katie

I'm glad you started writing this story again. I admire your writing style and wish I could write like you do. :D
Keep up the great work and update soon please!

good story. update soon please, thank you

wel they need to get back together soon
i love them together

I love this story! even though it makes me cry!

really nice chapter! melody is coming to her senses and i hope she'll fix things right soon :)

Good story! But not really much else to say =/ well written but very simple romance story, simple plot, but it's still good :) I think the plot could be more frustrating (in the good way) if one of the other characters was more a part of the problem, someone else helping to screw them both over. Just a suggestion. Can't wait for the next update!

I actually don't think I've ever reviewed this story before, but I've been a fan since around chapter twelve or thirteen. I love that not only have updated, I believe you've updated a total of four times in the past week, and it sounds like you're close to being done. Yay! :)

I really Carter. He's so sweet and he doesn't deserve Melody's treatment, especially with everything else going on in his life. I really want something to happen where Courtney yells at Melody, or at least take a firm tone with her. Somebody, please yell at Melody. I'd settle for Kenzie or Kaleigh (if she could pluck up the courage again).

If it sounds I hate Melody, I really don't, I just hate what she's doing to Carter, but even so, it's in character for her. She's emotionally stunted, reasonably so, and so I can see why Parker cheating on Kenzie completely wrecked her. She didn't have a very good template for relationships growing up, just Parker and Kenzie, and her only real relationship ended in disaster. It's completely understandable that she's not able to trust that Carter won't break her heart if Parker couldn't be there for Kenzie. I think Melody is a lot more sensitive and emotional than she appears, but she puts on a facade for the rest of the world to see, so therefore she comes off as emotionally stunted. Further more, I think Melody even tries to block the emotions she feels from herself, or she tells herself they are normal, and that's why she comes as closed off and empty in her POV.

I'm really curious what will happen next. I hope you update soon! Great chapter. :)