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| aphroditeseyes 2007-02-24 ch 10,  | abuseHaha, dear me. For some reason I always find text-speak disturbingly sinister, and all my texts are perfectly spelled. I hope that this poem was deeply ironic, and you're not hoping to take over the world with your SMSs (?) That would be scary. Anyway, it was nice to see an update from you :) I love your writing style. Oh, and any chance of an update for "A Cliche..."? any time soon? I miss it :( |
| Rockcrystal 2006-08-14 ch 1, | abusewo this POem is cool...and it has a Moral...lol ur such a gud writer! |
| funkyfiction 2006-06-14 ch 9, | abuseViv! I've said it once and ill say it again- you have such a talent for writing! Lol Loved the note-passing one, too bad that will never happen at our school, though i nearly got caught by Mr Pain once... Sorry. Please excuse my pitiful attempt for a review! - Jess |
| Pheobe Meryll 2006-05-31 ch 4, | abusevery very dark at the end but oh so real and sad. good writing. |
| Pheobe Meryll 2006-05-31 ch 3, | abuseLOL lovely little peice of flash fiction thar. Why does it remind me of myself reveresed? *blushes* |
| Pheobe Meryll 2006-05-31 ch 2, | abuse"she isn't drunk on the alcohol so much as the atmosphere." that's great I liked the reacurring theme of atmosphere - that's the motive (for lack of a better word) behind this whole peice. A bittersweet, kind of regretful feeling, but eventual acceptance of what happens and revelling in the moment. nice |
| Pheobe Meryll 2006-05-31 ch 1, | abuseI love this! I think it's great. The rhyme was simple and ...it kinda reminded me of one of those old moralistic nonesense poems, like "the new duckling" by alfred noyse, or something. loffly. i shall read more. |
| crinkled aster ribbon 2006-01-22 ch 9, | abusehaha, that last one was pretty cute. great job. |
| pixy-dizzy 2006-01-21 ch 9, | abuseThat...is so cute and real. And I love how Michael has spelling problems or writes in l33t or whatever it's called. And damnit but I want it to happen to me because my crush's name is Michael too. Boohoo. I'm going to go slit my wrists with my Rainbow Brite pencil case zipper now. ;D This was lovely. Really, it was. |
| Small Marshmallow 2006-01-21 ch 9, anon. | abuseVIV! I love this note-passing thing. I wish we went to a co-ed school, darnit. Harrumph. |
| Broken Spiral 2006-01-20 ch 9, | abuseSquee! Ha ha, you really know how to get a girl's romantic out. That was so effing -- AMAZINGLY sweet. It was -- an entire romance story (well, the ones that I like, anyway) packed into one chapter of notes! =P Me like, as you can see. |
| Broken Spiral 2006-01-20 ch 8, | abuseHaha! Cute, cute. I loved the morals. =O -nods solemnly- Endearing emoticons = they exist, but only in moderation. |
| Thomas Isaacson 2006-01-20 ch 1, | abuseI like this poem. Despite it's simplistic nature, it hits home with a very valid point. Really nice! |
| aphroditeseyes 2006-01-20 ch 9, | abuse*squeals girlishly" OMG i loved it. The note writing thing is part of the charm! |
| Amopet4 2006-01-19 ch 7, | abuseThis was cool. One crit:"A slipper of glass and a million shattered pieces"This line doesn't quite flow. You might consider taking out the word 'shattered'? I think it works slightly better.Anyway, I liked the poem. It would make an interesting song, I think. |