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| catseyeview 2005-12-20 ch 1, | abusewow, something new...quite talented you are. I can picture the whole scene. As for the book, I'm putting together "works for a creative/research dissertation" on the healing of literature...once I'm picking over my better pieces, I'll get them published...with the doctorate I had to wait to get it in the University library first...so then, hopefully spring/summer for the next work! sorry I took so long with this one. |
| Faithless Juliet 2005-12-14 ch 1, | abuseHm. [Its good to see you posting things again] not quite sure about this one though; it reminded me of that movie (can‘t think of the title) where John-Boy from the Walton’s makes it through all of WW1 but dies because he stands up in a trench to feed a bird in the last battle. (I remember watching it in High School as opposed to reading the book.) This is nice though, in an odd “We’re all ganna die!” Kind of way, it shows that desperation of battle. War is a mind killer. It kills the mind long before it takes the body. And yet, right now at this very moment we’re still fighting a war. Keep up the good work.Much love,Juliet. |