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| Nathan Ridge 2006-11-28 ch 1,  | abuseThe detail was good and again, I liked your tone and the ease at which you seem to be writing this. I felt the end was a little hasty but good nonetheless. I'll be sure to recomend this to a friend of mine. |
| Eliza Ithilwen 2005-12-14 ch 1, | abuseThis was very well writen. I have always loved mythology. It shows the classic trickery of the gods and how they are always using people as their personal toys. Very well done I think you deserve the "A." Keep up the great work. |