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| PindrakeCake 2008-04-21 ch 1,  | abuseah. so cute! loved it. |
| A. C. Oasis 2008-03-06 ch 1, | abuseLovely, loved how timid they both were. ^_^ |
| x-princessa-temnoti-x 2008-02-20 ch 1, | abuseAww...sweet. A tad unrealistic (but aren't many stories - that wasn't a dis), but very adorable. :) |
| TheGodMachine 2008-01-15 ch 1, | abuseCute. |
| True.Randomness 2007-11-17 ch 1, | abuseA very nice oneshot, though like all other oneshots it left me wanting more. But since I know I am not going to get that then I will just have to make uup in my head what happens after this. |
| Centi the Yaoi Hime 2007-10-14 ch 1, | abusefrankly I'd be a little creeped if I had a stalker but it worked for this story. After all everyone deserves to find a little happiness right? Its a cute story and a fun little read. Thanks for sharing it with us |
| MlleKathy 2007-10-13 ch 1, | abuseCute! :0 You're a good writer...! |
| vogueantichrist 2006-12-17 ch 1, | abuseCute. Loved it. |
| failte200 2006-11-21 ch 1, | abuseSigh. . Good, ya got me. It's good to see someone who knows when to stop, too... Excellent. Now let's see some of your others... |
| Fading Madness Productions 2006-08-20 ch 1, | abuseI just had a chance to read this, and wanted to drop a line that I enjoyed it immensely. I loved the fact that you left stereotypes in the dust by having Kenny not only as a nice guy and a football player, but that he's not just a nice guy in secret. He's an individual, with an individual personality, and it's great to have a chance to read something like that ^_^ |
| Beautiful Rendition 2006-07-08 ch 1, | abusei loved it. this made me happy |
| Lexy-Kun 2006-06-13 ch 1, | abuseI love this one-shot ! *eyes shining with happinness* really, it's so cute ! It's short, that's for sure, and i wouldn't mind if it was longer but it doesn't let me unsatisfied so it's okay.I like the way Henry seems at first glance to be the one craving for an opportunity to have a good relationship, but is actually the one to offer Kenny - who'd have been a prep if he wasn't openly gay - a chance. The way the situation are suddenly inversed : Henry was the confused one at first, and then in the end Kenny turn out to be the submissive one. I don't know if I'm making sense, so blame it in my english if I'm not...Well, anyway, thanks for this one-shot, I love it a lot !ps : I saw in your profile that you love your readers... ? Don't worry, we love you too XD (feel free to answer via my e-mail... *cough cough*) |
| SkyLark555 2006-05-25 ch 1, | abuseomg it's so cute you should add more to it cause it's to adorable to leave as just a one shot ~ Cat ~ |
| Melissa Norvell 2006-05-23 ch 1, | abuseVery interesting piece indeed. I'm a shounen-ai writer myself. If you'd like to checkout my works feel free I love getting new readers. It's not often when you find another author who has an uncanny ability to make a good story. Good luck to you in fiction! You do it justice! |
| Cel M. 2006-05-01 ch 1, | abuseAwe, that was so friggen cute and made me smile. I love Kenny, lol. And I just wanna hug Henry. Wonderful one-shot dude. |